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Hi, Alynn,

Hey, if I’m on my way to Forest Dale, I’d better remember the name! I’ll talk about RESTART when I’m there, OK?

Tips for your scene: It has a beginning, where you wonder what’s up with your Grandpa. It has a middle, where you have the conversation with your Mom. And it has an ending, where you come to a conclusion: see Grandpa more often, perhaps pray for him, maybe come to terms with the fact that this is a serious matter with an inevitable ending that will affact you and your whole family. That’s your outline. Now all you have to do is write it. I’m sure you can do it with feeling.

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