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Hi, Ty,

Thanks for posting. What do they look like? When I was your age, I used to skip over the parts with description, and you’re probably dong the same thing. Cap is described in terms of his hippie clothing and long fair hair. Rain has 2 descriptions — one as an elderly hippie Grandmotherly type, and the one at the end, when she’s a stylish older lady.

You know what? I like your way better. I always enjoyed picturing my favorite characters my own way — and I still skipped over any long paragraphs of description! It was easier that way.                                               —–Gordon Korman—–