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@Raymond: Same here. I read it in a slightly deeper voice. I know more about middle school boys than I’d like to.

@Raymond, Asher: Am I really the only one over here who really likes Nitro Nate? It’s cool to me, we don’t even know him yet! Maybe I just assume the best of people.

Chapter 10: This guy is really funny. He certainly has a voice, and it got me smiling during the beginning. It was nice to see the “prankster” character again. They make a showing in tons of books. However, I couldn’t really tell his voice. I mean, I could, but he didn’t seem super different from Yash, or Kaden, or Stuart. I feel like this chapter was more “get to know Jesse (I adore that name)” than “Move the Plot Forward”. I also don’t really know what’s going on with the plot except something’s up with Coach F and Bella’s being a brat about it.

I think the least voic-y characters were Sarah and Jesse. But yeah, I can’t imagine much about Jesse unlike Kaden and Yash. 

Now, for the actual chapter. Short, sweet, could have been done by Yash. I think it’s much cooler to see Yash’s mind in action (him signing up to be Zarcon.) I really liked how they got into the hacker-y stuff. That was SO cool. If only there was more, this is what got my mind thinking this would be some super mystery.

Be blessed,

Jade