Faker skit

Hi! I made a skit about one of the faker scenes specifically the one at the end with Logan (not spoiling if you haven’t read the book yet don’t look at this) so can you check it out and how do you think it is?

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1j4WyQeBc3R7UFf1_cFV3MWYwqn33Fwpc/view?usp=drivesdk