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Hi. Timothy,

Thanks for posting. I’m not sure what you expect from me. I wouldn’t be able to do your editing for you. That’s something you have to do on your own. Read your material out loud — that’s often a help in knowing what should be in it, and what doesn’t belong. And just do it over and over again until you’ve got what you consider the best material to hand in. Don’t be afraid to add material and cut what doesn’t seem to belong in the piece.

Good luck. Let me know how it goes.                                                             —–Gordon Korman—–