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Hi, Jaiden,
Thanks for posting and trusting me with your plot. I’m not really sure what you’re asking, so here’s a summary:
Why did they kidnap him and then abandon him? And why Vegas? And why the suspension? It isn’t as though no one will be looking for him during those 2 weeks, right?
I guess I don’t know enough to really comment. Sorry. My choice would be WHO AND WHAT, but I don’t really know enough to say why.
Sorry I can’t be more helpful, Jaiden. Good luck with the writing. —–Gordon Korman—–