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Thanks for the replies @Raymond! Little dopamine rush that makes coming back exciting 🙂

Chapter 3

Chapter 3 was a good one, but it didn’t really have that much detail because all they did was Yash talking to his friends. Though it was a pretty interesting conversation. -Neel

Amir takes football way too seriously! He needs to chill out and remember there’s more to life than sports. -Shaleen

Chapter 4

Arabella Hop needs to cool down because unfairness is a part of life. Not everything needs to be fair. Arabella is the first new perspective from Cleo and Yash, but she is a little too argumentative. -Neel

Oh no, I relate to Arabella WAY too much. The bit on Big Gym was a personal attack! I’m enjoying the plot moving along — what is Mrs. Finnerty’s deal? I mean I assumed if they hired her, she’s qualified, but now they’ve got me confused and wondering too. What are Yash and Arabella going to find out? I love that the one thing all the Slugfest kids have in common at this point is that they are all fierce Mrs. F. defenders. Maybe they’ll need to defend her from something.. -Shaleen