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I have read Notorious at least 10 times.  I love it, but there is a mistake that I think you made in chapter #22.  On page 226 & 227 *(the end of the chapter) you have bathroom times listed out by each person.  You wrote that L. Piccoli was out for 3:54 and V. Piccoli was out for 3:16.  Then said “we can rule out Ping, Farnsworth, Stickle and Tolenski, but not Lola Piccoli.  Even though she was absent less than 3:30, she could have been in cahoots with her husband who took longer.”  

According to the chart L. (Lola) Piccoli was out MORE than 3:30 and her husband V. Piccoli took LESS time.  

I wanted to let you know for when the book is printed in the future.  

P.S. I have been reading your books since I was in 2nd grade and I am in 5th grade now.  I think you are a wonderful writer.  

Superfan, George