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Chapter 10

Good to meet ya, Kimberly Tooley. You sure seem starstruck by Chase Ambrose. (And you do love your parenthetical asides, don’t you?)

An outsider is a good choice to narrate the scene with Brendan, the football team, and Chase. Even with her Chase infatuation, she’s probably the one with the least biased perspective on what was happening.

Chase is quickly growing apart from his football buddies. I see this incident as a continuation of the locker room scene—where he decides on his own who he wants to be, rather than acting the way others expect him to.

@Jade: You nicely crystallized the same things I was thinking about Kimmy. Rah rah, yay for her school spirit. But if she liked the old Chase, what does that say about her judgment?