[Connor Hense]

Hello! I am a 13 year old currently working on writing a story of my own, and I have decided to contact you for feedback! It is only about 50 pages with an average of 2 pages per chapter (3 in some cases) but I am planning to expand chapter length in later drafts. Would you please read it? Thank you! When you respond, I will send a copy of it here.

Sincerely,

Connor Hense

Sorry, Connor, but I have had to make it my policy not to read other people's work. For one thing, I am not an editor. But it's actually because I get so many requests that I would end up doing everyone's work except my own.

Find someone you trust to give you the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth about your work. A mom, an aunt or uncle, an older cousin, a special teacher. Hand over your work, if they'll read it for you. And listen to their praise/criticism.

I'm sorry to have to disappoint you, but I'm afraid I just don't have the time. Good luck with your story!

                                                    Regards,                                                               -----Gordon Korman-----